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Vive' le discours ...

Well, so much for the 'sophomore jinx' and 'sloppy sequel' theology-- this issue's poetry illustrates beyond the doubt of a shadow that there's life after birth; heady, hearty, and happenstance as hell maybe, but life nonetheless. Which means, of course, that we continue the pleasurable process of percolating perceptions through all the different filters of poetic expression. Take a look at the works that have arrived here over the last few months; there's an interesting interplay going on between them, something beyond the craft of their creation-- thoughts alive with a life of their own, even as they echo each other.  These poets don't just have something to say;  they make it breathe ...
 
 

On the cover:   Self-portrait with rose background (detail)   Oil on canvas  1875    Paul Cezanne

 

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Volume 2 Issue 1 January 2002
       TABLE OF CONTENTS:
 

White In The Shadows                                      Michael R. Burch         Nashville, TN
Déjà vu Duet                                                      Jennifer Lagier         Marina, CA
Planes of View                                                   Ian Andrews         Oldham, UK
Summer Romance                                            Wendy Taylor Carlisle         Texarkana, TX
Southern Comfort                                              Harvey Stanbrough         Pittsboro, IN
Alive Alive O!                                                     Karin Henderson         Europe
Like Isadora D                                                   Steve Delchamps         Chicago, IL
One More Lost Night at The Fiery Hole          Jack Granath         Kansas City, MO
Living in the Moment                                         Jean Crane         Danville, CA
Hazelridge,  Detroit                                           Christina-marie Umscheid         Petoskey, MI
One-Way Ticket                                                 David Anthony       Stoke Poges, UK
Sharp                                                                  Kathie Isaac-Luke       San Jose, CA
The Pattern                                                        Steve Delchamps         Chicago, IL
Mesa in Sedona                                                Jean Crane          Danville, CA

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POEMS:


White in the Shadows            by Michael R. Burch
 

White in the shadows
I see your face,
unbidden.  Go, tell
Love it is commonplace;

Tell Regret it is not so rare.

Our love is not here
though you smile,
full of infinite grace.
In such darkness, I fear

the past is a dangerous place.
 
 

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Déjà vu Duet            by Jennifer Lagier
 

Some people are like that.
They split up and then they think:
Hey, maybe we haven’t hurt each other to the uttermost.
Let’s meet up and have a drink.
  --James Fenton

Stunted simians,
we sit at this sad bar
and exhume the past,
explore what still hurts,
which wounds remain bleeding.

You compliment my scars.
I admire your bruising.
All the while, we secretly contemplate
what untouched parts might respond
to renewed mutilation.

Weekly, we meet
to remove any protective scabs,
use mutually inflicted pain
as communication.

Let’s review it again and again,
probe what still twitches,
dissect any quivering,
overlooked wholeness.
 
 

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Planes of View            by Ian Andrews
 

I peel the window from the wall
tired of the sight it barely affords
and unfurl it on some other boards.
The scene accosted through grimy chintz
makes frame and glass and putty wince
and though I agree with the window
it doesn't make either of us light.

A new wall, a new view
for the shiftable window to
abet, affect, give dim reflection to
then mutely protest as it is re-peeled
re-skewed, re-stuck, revealed
next to my closed collapsible door.
Yes--this one. This exit feels right.
 
 

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Summer Romance            by Wendy Taylor Carlisle
 

It wasn’t you telling me what to do over and over
as the light leaked out of August, or your lists and juxtapositions:
body parts, love names or the man I kissed in the hibiscus garden.

The fact that you knew Astrolabe for who he was and that rhinos
ejaculate for an immodest hour, only put off the inevitable.
The stations of summer heated up our conversations:

sweat and the half-undressed, a girl’s unspeakably white skin
beneath the turquoise surface, my bikini top livid
across my breasts, vacations, children shrill

on the patio, the carny coming to town, the orders of snow peas,
squash, tomatoes, each in turn.  This morning, the dogs pant on the concrete
the torrid weather is nearly done.  The heat always ends around here

in a rainstorm, in a doublecross, in a low-wattage smile.
 
 

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Southern Comfort            by Harvey Stanbrough
 

One day he sat to write about Comfort
and all the proper things it would entail:
his comfy cottage-house; his picket fence;
a clothesline stretched out back; and his good wife,
bending to her basket, hanging linens
(his and hers, their daughter’s and their son’s);
two pups; a rangy cat; a parakeet;
and evenings spent before a cozy fire.

But he awoke: the cottage-house had burned,
the picket fence had melted, and the clothes
line had snapped, as had his wife, both pups,
the cat, the parakeet, and both the kids—
something to do with volatility
and how the volatile should never try
to live a life inviolate of stress—
then he snapped too, and everything was fine.
 
 

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Alive Alive O!            by Karin Henderson

(This nonce form is read by proceeding
through the lines of each stanza as follows:
line 1 / line 11, followed by lines 2 / 10, 3 / 9,
4 / 8, 5 / 7; line 6, in the middle, comes last.  Ed.)
 

I had a life tonight
you returned from Dublin
we searched for names of galaxies
a map of the Universe unfolded
with birchwood burning amber
through old Irish whiskey
we discussed species of cockles
on Molly Malone's cart
and found the answer too
in a Guide to the Seashore
I have kept since childhood

I had a life tonight
I have kept since childhood
you returned from Dublin
in a Guide to the Seashore
we searched for names of galaxies
and found the answer too
a map of the Universe unfolded
on Molly Malone's cart
with birchwood burning amber
we discussed species of cockles
through old Irish whiskey
 
 

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Like Isadora D            by Steve Delchamps
 

She wore
     a scarf--darkly long,
translucent, tucked
     under tousled hairline
of gel-scrunched curls.

He, baseball cap brim-forward,
      courtly asked a light.
Her winged reply to which,
     not without twinkle:
This is a non-lighter-working day.

And he then, Wait--
     rising up sudden, moving
toward car-trunk, raising door,
     rummaging-- I'll serenade you.
And she, demurring friendly:
     Dude. I've got a head-ache.

To them, a second brim.
     Ensued some minutes' banter,
twinkle-winged. All then preparing
     to move on, the scarfed cried
Shotgun! skipped to car-door, leaping

In, still smokely plumed and
     bravely beautiful, rode in state
with proud-laughing brims away.
 
 

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One More Lost Night at The Fiery Hole            by Jack Granath
 

Standing passive by the maelstrom,
Hands a-pockets on the very lip,
I crush against the dancers as they come,
Yielding with a practiced backward step.

Up on the stage, the band is breaking loose,
All sweat and stumble, broken strings and hair;
Their music rides the edge of one huge mess,
But perfectly, a tapestried disaster.

Against which Julie, with her sidelong look,
Julie, with her insult of a smile,
Comes pulsing, swinging, swaying to the mike
And lets the wine of red abandon spill.

Another fight breaks out, the fratboys swerve,
The music, confused, bumbles to a stop,
And bottles popping on the concrete serve
The rhythm that my nerves have taken up.

A punk-rock girl comes bloody from the floor,
And I’m too old for this, too smart, too sane,
But I turn nonchalantly from the door
As soon as Julie starts to sing again.
 
 

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Living in the Moment            Jean Crane
 

Today the clouds were eerie,
bunched up in ominous shapes,
like El Greco’s View of Toledo
which, I am told, has duende,
that ghostly spirit who loves the dark,
waiting for the other shoe to drop.

It’s not easy living on this earth,
choosing between angels and devils,
mixing dread with joy in a single day.
If I could stand for a moment in the
vertical dimension embracing everything,
I would rejoice in silence.  Now

I sit in my living room alone
as late afternoon sunshine
filters through shutters, a crystal
splinters into rainbows on the wall.
Light, dancing on tabletops
shines into corners.  Everything is alive.
 
 

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Hazelridge,  Detroit            by Christina-marie Umscheid
 

Dead dogs rot on abandoned lawns.
An electric cord dangles,
as a leash that strangled
someone's pet,

Houses are crumbled,
red clay with frightening eyes.

Victims are raped
in the silence of corners.
Broken chairs sit as witnesses.

Through cracks in
boarded windows prowlers can see
glass shattered so long ago
it looks like glittering sand.

Children pass
to and from school.  Their
lessons are litter on this street.

One and one can equal death.
Danger has become art.
 
 

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One-Way Ticket            by David Anthony
 

They closed the line and just the track remains.
The miners' railway where we used to play
in far-off summers when I came to stay
now echoes with the ghosts of long-gone trains.

Cwm Cynfal and the Ceunant--wild terrains
so loved in childhood, missed in years away--
will never change: when I returned today
they matched the images my mind sustains.

The rest is altered irretrievably.
My kin died years ago or else moved on--
no point in staying, once the work was gone--
and folk there now do not remember me.

My ties are broken far beyond repair.
The line is closed and just the tracks are there.
 

Note:
"Cwm Cynfal and the Ceunant": the valley and gorge of the River Cynfal,
pronounced "Koom Kunval and the Kuynant"
 
 

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Sharp            by Kathie Isaac-Luke
 

I don't remember our parting
words, or the kiss, though
there must have been one.
When you climbed
the steps onto the train
you turned your head as though
you heard your name carried
on currents of air, interwoven
with the sounds of wheel on track,
the departures announced in several languages.
You almost looked back,
then you decided. I stood by
the tracks scanning the
windows for your face,
but I didn't see you--
I remember the precise angle
at which you turned your head
 
 

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The Pattern            by Steve Delchamps
 

My cousin cat,
who is middle-aged but spry,
from her nest in the bedclothes
casts a calm feline eye
on life, on death--all of that.

She participates, even while she dreams,
in an economics of rest and motion,
and daily pursues her art,
demanding steadfast devotion
to the practical science of sunbeams.

Her belly's firm outline is a template,
a pattern of all beauty that is animate,
all health worthy of aspiration.
(Indeed, where she lies my cousin
is a site of manifold admiration.)

And my bike-before-dawn,
vitamin-supplemented quest for 'homeostasis,'
when properly considered, is revealed
as merely a strained mimesis
of her stretch, her yawn.
 
 

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Mesa in Sedona            by Jean Crane
 

Before sunrise we stood, at the edge of the mesa,
clutching mugs of coffee, as the dark town below
waited in silence for light to rise in the east,
faint, diffused glow. Slowly we turned west

to watch the pinnacle on the far off mountain,
framed by darkened skies, receive the warm touch
of incandescence, red rocks ablaze with welcoming blush,
an unrobed woman surprised by her lover.

Our eyes caught awakening vermilion cliffs, Indian
red crevices, terra cotta spires, dawn spreading
like fire from right to left as light swept magically
across the rugged range.

Each evening at sunset, we returned with glasses
of chilled white wine, to drink to certainty,
watched the sun gather up her glory
like a mother calling in her children at night,

leaving in place darkening shadows
sliding across the mountain face.
 
 

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Carnelian   V2 Iss1  January, 2002